Zantaria Holmes
3/3/17
XLAP Sticky Notes
Ms.Bryant ela9.6pd.
Future Orientation people today use pools on the ground for swimming, But In the movie, Tomorrow Land, they are swimming/teleporting through mid-Air.
When my mother tell me to stop fooling around & start doing better in your dancing & with your teachers.
You did a great job in relating your selection to the topic. I like the way you related swimming pools from today and swimming pools from Tomorrow Land.
You need to make your statement clear . You also need to tell more about what your talking about.
you did very good i really got a good understanding on your idea. I like how you put two things together. And plus your right about how people are using pools today because back then they used them a certain way back then.